English Language Paper 1, Question 5-GCSEs 2022 Edition-Complete Walkthrough

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wahi 🤍
wahi 🤍 2 ay əvvəl
So nervous for Wednesday! Hope all goes well for everyone
Saleem Saiyed
Saleem Saiyed 13 gün əvvəl
I wrote sarene not serene it wasn't clear on video so do you get any marks ?
S 16
S 16 2 ay əvvəl
@Username bro we are pattern that was so good only q5 was iffy
Username
Username 2 ay əvvəl
30 mins, I’m scared
S 16
S 16 2 ay əvvəl
lol starts in 1 and half hours
MoOoDLe mIP
MoOoDLe mIP 2 ay əvvəl
THIS IS THE TEACHER I WANT. No messing, no sugar coating, no falling for popularism. HONESTLY YOU ARE SAVING ME RN.
Joakima Appiah-kubi
Joakima Appiah-kubi 2 ay əvvəl
@Aly M wdym
Lugeer
Lugeer 2 ay əvvəl
@Aly M what did he do
Ryan Breich
Ryan Breich 2 ay əvvəl
@Aly M hahahaaha
Aly M
Aly M 2 ay əvvəl
Aged well
Ryan Breich
Ryan Breich 2 ay əvvəl
no u dont this is plagarism
The chill channel
The chill channel 2 ay əvvəl
I learned more in a couple of your vids than 4 years in set 1 English
mal_
mal_ 2 ay əvvəl
Same bruh
Hamza Pandor
Hamza Pandor 2 ay əvvəl
Same man
Hugo Gomez
Hugo Gomez 2 ay əvvəl
I went from a grade 3 and throughout this year I’ve been steadily rising to a grade 4, 5, 6, 7 and 8. Hard work pays off.
Guri Habib
Guri Habib 2 ay əvvəl
Bom dia
Newly Bacon
Newly Bacon 2 ay əvvəl
wow very well done. maybe you’ll even get a 9 tmrw, good luck! :)
kreef
kreef 2 ay əvvəl
@MPH i got the exact same haha
MPH
MPH 2 ay əvvəl
SAME I GOT A GRADE 3 IN YEAR TEN MOCKS THIS LATES MARCH MOCKS I GOT AN 8 LES GO BROOO
Hugo Gomez
Hugo Gomez 2 ay əvvəl
@Pam Poone sure try see if you can get ideas, vocabulary, language and structural devices from the section A extract and use those in your story. Most of the time the extract will be something similar to the story suggestion given for question 5.
Abdullah
Abdullah 2 ay əvvəl
Wallahi these videos are so helpful. I don't usually comment on videos but I feel like there was well deserved praise right here. Thank you so much for your hard work. You have helped a new generation of english GCSE students and also future English GCSE Students. I'm gonna be watching all of your videos throughout all the english examinations that I have coming up.
sus pended
sus pended 2 ay əvvəl
are you using his story
habiba
habiba 2 ay əvvəl
hes a legend fr
Rayyjan
Rayyjan 2 ay əvvəl
currently 12:18 wednesday the 18th of may. sleep then exam. Thank you so much for all the help. Genuinly helped me so much, learnt in 20 mins what no teacher could teach me in hours. Thank you and good luck to everyone else.
On time
On time 2 ay əvvəl
How was it?
lilian hanemiya
lilian hanemiya 2 ay əvvəl
good luck
TheCurryNet
TheCurryNet 2 ay əvvəl
i wrote a story that is similar in structure to your priest story, it is about a park but it is in the daytime contrasted with night time. ive had it marked and i got 35/40, id like to add a few more manipulated sentences to create a better structure these videos are so good, i feel so much more confident for tomorrow, in sha Allah it will go great for everyone:)
hi
hi 2 ay əvvəl
@mel can you give an example
lllxL
lllxL 2 ay əvvəl
@Ellis Griggs yes
Ellis Griggs
Ellis Griggs 2 ay əvvəl
@mel is it best to write in first person
mel
mel 2 ay əvvəl
@hi write about waking up in heaven, describe how you feel, your surroundings etc. hope this helps
hi
hi 2 ay əvvəl
Can you give some sentence starters for the priest story please
Tanya Zichawo
Tanya Zichawo 2 ay əvvəl
I was on a grade 5 and then i watched you for my mocks and i got an 8 in all papers language and literature thank you so much sir inshallah i will get a 9 ❤️
Ryan Breich
Ryan Breich 2 ay əvvəl
this is literally plagerism
Crim Blox
Crim Blox 2 ay əvvəl
@Khaula Lone :)
Pepsi Man
Pepsi Man 2 ay əvvəl
@Daniel pray ayatul kursi
Khaula Lone
Khaula Lone 2 ay əvvəl
@Crim Blox AMEEN
Abby
Abby 2 ay əvvəl
@A S while reading the extract ask yourself what it makes you think of and how/why it portrays that as the explanation, you can use the techniques and zoom in on certain words for small details as well
Enkiad Bin Roshid
Enkiad Bin Roshid 2 ay əvvəl
Thr effort’s you’ve put on is amazing and deserve a clap. Thanks a bunch sir! We’ll smash the test In Shaa Allah and make your efforts worth 💙
Digby Harrison
Digby Harrison 2 ay əvvəl
I’m writing this on Wednesday the 18th i’ve just finished my English language paper one GCSE and just wanted to say thanks to you Sir and a reminder to anyone watching these videos that if you do what this dude says I can assure you you will do well!! Good luck
Reiss Lai
Reiss Lai 2 ay əvvəl
How many people in your school wrote about the priest?
Alpherix
Alpherix 2 ay əvvəl
you my friend are a life - saver, I did a practice Unseen Poetry in class and used your Structure (PRTEZEL) and I got a Grade 6, I am so grateful for you helping me and wish everybody luck for their GCSE exams
Alpherix
Alpherix 2 ay əvvəl
@UnicornKid72 Its Point Reference (Quote) Technique Explain the Effect Zoom Explain the Effect ( Of the Zoom) Link
UnicornKid72
UnicornKid72 2 ay əvvəl
What does PRTEZEL stand for?
AbylayAlt
AbylayAlt 2 ay əvvəl
I am jubiliant that I found this video; I am indignant to not have seen it before. Theis heinous exam's mark scheme befuddled me for a long time. This video keeps my mind serene from all doubts and morose feelings. Gargantuan thanks to you ! (the use of gargantuan feels inappropriate tho)
Anson Huang
Anson Huang 2 ay əvvəl
Got my english in 8 hrs and I have learnt more from your videos than I have in the last 3 years, now I can go into my exam with some confidence.
maj kg
maj kg 2 ay əvvəl
same bro
Natalie C
Natalie C 2 ay əvvəl
I wish I would’ve started watching these videos last year 😂 thank you! Amazing
Big Chad
Big Chad 2 ay əvvəl
“2 language devices 1 punctuation 2 vocabulary each paragraph”- THANK YOU 🙏
1471
1471 2 ay əvvəl
do you think our mocks will be similar to our results? i'm scared that i wont get a similar result but im aiming for higher
Bread Man
Bread Man 2 ay əvvəl
Don't worry about it too much, i don't think they will be too hard because they are kinda going easy on us with the whole lockdown thing. You'll get what you get and that's all you can do.
Richard Austin
Richard Austin 2 ay əvvəl
I'm scared the texts won't be anywhere near similiar so I won't be able to make infs
eshaa rani
eshaa rani 2 ay əvvəl
I would just like to thankyou sir for all the videos as they have all been very helpful.Tbh ive learnt more from you then what ive learnt in class in the last 2 yrs.Good luck everyone may waheguru ji bless us all
duniya jamshed
duniya jamshed 2 ay əvvəl
I am completely feeling befuddled because Wednesday is my paper 1 exame. I have exam phobia and I do NOT know how to keep calm or how I even do better. Thank you for teaching us beautifully.
Kardox Cenna
Kardox Cenna 2 ay əvvəl
You’re not alone, just remember that. Inshallah you’ll do good. Believe in the Qadr of Allah and you’ll be fine.
Mohammad Abowath
Mohammad Abowath 2 ay əvvəl
Just take a deep breath and stay calm.🙂
solentsquared
solentsquared 2 ay əvvəl
english language is the one subject where i genuinely think i’m in reach of a 9- i’m so grateful for this video!
NoScopeMax
NoScopeMax 2 ay əvvəl
If anyone thinks they might need this: 25 Language Devices: Defined & Explained! 1. Pathetic Fallacy Is when the weather or the atmosphere describes the mood. For example, when the weather is rainy people are sad and depressed 2nd example, the dark night could symbolise something supernatural like 3AM Satan etc… 2. Personification Is when a non-human is given human qualities. For example, the tree is waving to John as drives away. 3. Simile When you are comparing two things using ‘like’ or ‘as’ For example, his facial vision looked like a falcon’s eye 4. Metaphor Is when you are comparing two things with is or are Example He is an orc 5. Extended Metaphor Pick a metaphor and explain how --- > turn in to an extended metaphor Metaphor --- > Life is a rollercoaster. Now turning into extended metaphor add explanation so, Life is a rollercoaster you don’t know when you will be at the top or at the bottom, it will all happen in an instance, at the greatest heights you will be at the greatest heights and at times it will crash, but every day is never the same, just like in a turn in a Rolle coaster is never the same. 6. Oxymoron 2 opposite words side-by-side Example, the small giant 7. Juxtaposition You explain an oxymoron. The small giant tip-toing trying to reach the top shelf, however, his small arms and puny fingers prevented him from grabbing the bar of jam. 8. Symbolism Is when objects represent a meaning. For example, moon and the star represent Islam. 2nd Example, if you get a priest you will think someone died. In Macbeth the dagger links to death. 9. Semantic field Is where words are linked to an idea. For example, PPE, 2m and Hand Sanitiser, Head of Year link to COVID. 10. Irony Is when events in the text surprises the characters. Something not expected! Mr Birling offering a 1000. Scrooge changing his nature. 11. Rhetorical Question Question does not require an answer 12. Hyperbole Is when you hype, when over-exaggerating. I am going to eat the whole restaurant. 13. Assonance Is the repetition of the vowel sound. I am too cool for school. Oooooo 14. Alliteration Words in a row begin with the same letter. 15. Sibilance Is when words in a row have the s letter or the s sound Example: the snake was slowly hissing 16. Euphemism Is when you say something in an indirect manner. He is not with us anymore. 17. Emotive Language Is when the writer makes the reader feel emotional. By making them angry. 18. Onomatopoeia Words describe the sound Boom bang skirr pop 19. Ruel of 3 / Power of 3 / Triplets Words or phrases in a row describe something (3) The table is black, hard and wide 20. Facts/ Stats Uses evidence to support their facts. 50 % of the students prefer using email rather than social media . 21. Plosive Reptation of harsh sound Words such as 'P' 'D' 'B' 22. Zoomorphism Is when you give a person animal features. Example John barked at me / John shouted at me. 23. Opinion 24. Repetition Language Device and Structure. Is when the writer uses the words repletely to create an effect. Where is being repeated and why is that important 25. Noun, Verbs, Adjectives, Adverbs Structure Flashback - when you go back in time ,3 days ago etc.. Foreshadowing - when the writer gives clue about future ‘my heart was beating fast’ Zoom in - focus on one thing for example ‘pen’ , ‘specific character ‘ Zoom out - normally used to talk about setting Dialogue - when the character speak ‘hey there !’ New character New setting Change in tone Short sentence - to build up tense Long sentence - add details and slow down the narrative Short /long sentence - may show importance in both Shift in focus - talks about object then talks about another object for example ‘pen’ to ‘table’ Cyclical structure - similar stuff happening with beginning and ending Juxtaposition Extended metaphor Pace List Pov Overall tone Chronogical order Climax Repetition Links Mood , pathetic fallacy 1. Abhorrent/Heinous (means bad) 2. Euphoric/Jubilant (means happy) 3. Melancholy/Morose (means sad) 4. Indignant (means angry) 5. Swift/Rapid (means fast) 6. Colossal/Gargantuan (means big) 7. Minuscule/Microscopic (means small) 8. Bemused/Befuddled (means confused) 9. Astute/Shrewd (means smart) 10. Feeble/Decrepit (means weak) 11. Dash (means run) 12. Plunge (means jump - may not always fit so be careful how you use it) 13. Cordial (means nice) 14. Lackadaisical (means lazy) 15. Paradoxical/Outlandish (means strange)
Mikaela Kasese-Johnes
Mikaela Kasese-Johnes Ay əvvəl
Absolute legend of a person.
Aaron
Aaron Ay əvvəl
Year 10 here, mocks soon you've definitely just earned me 5 more marks, thank you so much for this
soobin
soobin Ay əvvəl
ily
AB Hassan
AB Hassan 2 ay əvvəl
big respect
NoScopeMax
NoScopeMax 2 ay əvvəl
@Vexed no worries good luck
TazzarAmin🌹 *MEP*
TazzarAmin🌹 *MEP* 2 ay əvvəl
For the creative writing, if you already have a story planned and memorised, do you have to match it to the description/story that’s in Q5? Or would you be able to just write out the story without having to follow the picture or story? PS. We students miss you Sir 😭 love from CHSG
Aayan Hussain
Aayan Hussain 2 ay əvvəl
I do the dentist method and do a description and when i get into the dentist room and lay back and see a frame on the walk (which is the photo in the paper) then do a flashback
J
J 2 ay əvvəl
Can I use this for the eduqas exam board?
Joseph Halliday
Joseph Halliday 2 ay əvvəl
@ItsSapi I'm not too sure because I don't do aqa. If it is a title, then it can be anywhere, if it says "write about..." then it can also be anywhere, but in eduqas we can get ones where it says it has to start/end in a certain sentence
ItsSapi
ItsSapi 2 ay əvvəl
@Joseph Halliday Do you have to link it to the question at the start of your story or can it be anywhere eg: at the middle or end. I'm doing aqa btw.
Joseph Halliday
Joseph Halliday 2 ay əvvəl
@mark roba yeah it's so annoying. I have a story that could potentially get a grade I want I just don't know if the plot is good enough
Gol
Gol Ay əvvəl
I am in Year 9, but I used a similar plot to this as the question was to write about two people from different backgrounds, and I used the priest and the God, but I got marked 25/40, which is a decrease from when I got 29/40 a few months ago, so I'm not sure what went wrong.
William Morais
William Morais 29 gün əvvəl
You used every single on if these?
Kipstar
Kipstar 2 ay əvvəl
This has helped so much, I really like the idea of paragraph 2 and 4 juxtaposing
Twylo
Twylo 2 ay əvvəl
Thanks so much you’ve helped so much. Will be watching you through this week
binx binx
binx binx 2 ay əvvəl
Thank you, you have been so helpful. I look forward to watching your live on Tuesday
kingyaqub_din
kingyaqub_din 2 ay əvvəl
Man gcse's on Monday everyone has to give there best we can do this
Nicole🥥
Nicole🥥 2 ay əvvəl
Did you do aqa what was the question
ThatRandomGuyWithNoName
ThatRandomGuyWithNoName 2 ay əvvəl
@Leo ohh he ment computing or RE
Leo
Leo 2 ay əvvəl
@ThatRandomGuyWithNoName it’s not the same subject silly
ThatRandomGuyWithNoName
ThatRandomGuyWithNoName 2 ay əvvəl
Wait you have it on Monday? Give answers plss
_XXXEXTENTIONXXX_
_XXXEXTENTIONXXX_ 2 ay əvvəl
@J not sure…it should be ok tho
Thiago Zuliani
Thiago Zuliani 2 ay əvvəl
Used your story and a bit of your technique on paper 1, I’ll work more on vocabulary and language devices for paper 2, you’ve been really helpful. Life saver
jiminsgotjams
jiminsgotjams 2 ay əvvəl
You’re gonna be disqualified by aqa unfortunately due to “plagiarism” 😭
Javhus100k
Javhus100k 2 ay əvvəl
How did your exam go
Jude Thompson
Jude Thompson 2 ay əvvəl
I’m on a grade 8 right now for language in my mocks you needed 66 marks for a 9, I got 65, at first I was trying to grovel for marks, then I realised that on this question I only got 29, which left a three mark margin for error for questions 1-4. Albeit I only dropped 4 marks on questions 1-4 the point still stands that my creative writing needs to improve, so o thank you for this video it will hopefully be the difference between a grade 8 and a 9
d
d 2 ay əvvəl
@Jude Thompson sorry i was not suppose to reply to u😭 it was for @amy lousie who said abt getting a 4. But thankyou still, good luck!
Jude Thompson
Jude Thompson 2 ay əvvəl
@d my school used official grade boundaries 66 is a 9 I got 65 in my paper 1 and 68 in my paper 2 not meaning to offend or sound hostile, but 66 is a 9, as for 56/80 I believe that’s the lowest 7 you can get
d
d 2 ay əvvəl
@Jude Thompson in my school I got 57 and it was a 6, but me everything English says that it is a 7. 50 should be a 6 or maybe 5
Jude Thompson
Jude Thompson 2 ay əvvəl
@Amy Louise
Amy Louise <3
Amy Louise <3 2 ay əvvəl
I got 50 and got told ir was a 4😭😭
Prnc ye
Prnc ye 2 ay əvvəl
this man is single handedly saving us all
Nathan
Nathan 2 ay əvvəl
💀💀💀
FPV Drone Central
FPV Drone Central 2 ay əvvəl
you are so helpful bro - keep up the videos!
Nirlep Singh
Nirlep Singh 2 ay əvvəl
This video's great - good luck to everyone for their exams , can't wait for Tuesday!!!
Nirlep Singh
Nirlep Singh 2 ay əvvəl
@MoOoDLe mIP Lmaoo I don't was to do the test eitherrr but the video was a great help - I'd be lost without it. Good luck tommorow for your exams, DW all will go well!
MoOoDLe mIP
MoOoDLe mIP 2 ay əvvəl
Can’t wait? CAN’T WAIT!?!? C A N ‘ T W A I T ! ? ! ? U sure about that cos atm I can’t wait to die but I most definitely can wait for Tuesday
Saad barbarawi
Saad barbarawi 2 ay əvvəl
walah you amazing i just want to say from a college student that you are amazing and we all appreciate all the hard work and information you share with us
cocnut
cocnut 2 ay əvvəl
Since both Yr 10 and 11 are doing this exam will the Yr 10 affect the grade boundaries too? Or is it separate?
not charli
not charli 2 ay əvvəl
thanks so much for this, i was way more confident in my exam and i know ill pass it now bc of this :) tysm
Ultimate Revision
Ultimate Revision 2 ay əvvəl
This video is cordial, I feel anxious and slightly petrified but the positive comments are helping to raise my levels of euphoria making me feel more jubilant!
Ultimate Revision
Ultimate Revision 2 ay əvvəl
@Zyncx EC we will stick to the literal English definition tyvm of happiness!
Zyncx EC
Zyncx EC 2 ay əvvəl
@Ultimate Revision well yes but is has lots of connotations
Ultimate Revision
Ultimate Revision 2 ay əvvəl
@Zyncx EC means happiness?
Zyncx EC
Zyncx EC 2 ay əvvəl
Euphoria might not have neen the right word 💀
Vanesa Ivanova
Vanesa Ivanova Ay əvvəl
I am so thankful teachers on youtube like this are a thing because right now if i didnt watch all the paper 1 videos i would be finished for my mock tomorrow
Weezer Gaming
Weezer Gaming 2 ay əvvəl
all my fellow year 11s here right now, I FEEL YOU.
Hai1fire
Hai1fire 2 ay əvvəl
Your the best place to go when i need to revise for english. keep it up.
Osee Duku
Osee Duku 2 ay əvvəl
this video is worth more than a whole year of a school.
javerya shakeel
javerya shakeel 2 ay əvvəl
Good luck to everyone doing GCSE'S over the next month🥰
Spongebob
Spongebob 2 ay əvvəl
watched this before 3 hours left in exam, ultra legend,,,,,,
Ben Sherry
Ben Sherry 2 ay əvvəl
I’m writing like a robot 🤖 today! Thanks for the advise.
Peaches x
Peaches x 2 ay əvvəl
thank you so much i feel prepeared for my exam tommorow!
famous mk
famous mk 2 ay əvvəl
Thanks for you advice, it really helped
Sameerah Farooqi
Sameerah Farooqi 2 ay əvvəl
Can you do this same type of video for writing a Description in Q5 because if both options are a description (could happen) then we need to prepared for that too
ChilX
ChilX 2 ay əvvəl
It won’t happen
YoRambo
YoRambo 2 ay əvvəl
For the 2020 paper the question was " write about a time when YOU visited a place that was new to you" i used this plot with the priest in heaven and my tutor said that i answered the correction wrong. he said you have to do an experience which is not fantasy and you need to do more description. can someone please answer whether this story could be used for this question???
YoRambo
YoRambo 2 ay əvvəl
@ゆじ ah ok, have you seen any other videos of story ideas or nah
ゆじ
ゆじ 2 ay əvvəl
@YoRambo no simply because this video has a big fanbase, this plot will be therefore embedded in lots of peoples writing and it'll cause a stereotypical view on the writing if they see this plot embedded, unless of course you meet all the requirements
YoRambo
YoRambo 2 ay əvvəl
@ゆじ oh ok are you using the same plot aswell?
ゆじ
ゆじ 2 ay əvvəl
idk your teachers kinda clapped, it doesnt matter. like sair said, those 5 things then no reason to not get a 9
__ maria
__ maria 2 ay əvvəl
if quite a lot of people use this format won't it become quite obvious to the examiners and they might grade down...?
Jessy
Jessy 2 ay əvvəl
exactly what i thought
Abidur
Abidur 2 ay əvvəl
you're like the freesciencelessons of english
rng is meta
rng is meta 2 ay əvvəl
Watching this with an hour and a half till the exam lol, good luck everyone!
aminaaa7
aminaaa7 2 ay əvvəl
Do the examiners marking our answers see the actual Source given?? And if you use a short sentence from the Source do you think you would get marked down for that??
Cloudy
Cloudy 2 ay əvvəl
can you please do a quick video explaining how you can link this story to any question we get using the questions from past papers.
d
d 2 ay əvvəl
He alr has one
Sarah Sotuminu
Sarah Sotuminu 2 ay əvvəl
This is amazing! I feel like I’m running late!
Adib Arshed Rahman
Adib Arshed Rahman 26 gün əvvəl
It's a bit sad that the exam only tests you on how much you can write in a certain amount of time and limits your actual creativity :(
reza dadkhah
reza dadkhah 2 ay əvvəl
29 min before my exam this guy may have clutched the exam 4 me
Pari Thakur
Pari Thakur 2 ay əvvəl
Hi sir can I use this plot for edexcel exam on Wednesday
ItsWaddle
ItsWaddle 2 ay əvvəl
everyone saying "good luck" can we change that to "do well" we dont need luck weve got this. do well in your exams
Aryan Tam
Aryan Tam Ay əvvəl
I have not revised at all for my English mock exam which is tommorow, I will be using this video (using the same story) along with all of the language devices provided by this teacher, i will be commenting again on this video and ill show all of you guys the grade that i have gotten when i have gotten my results. i have loads of faith in this englishh teacher for him to help me get me a good grade, a nice short video and he summarised EVERYTHING which makes everything so much more easier, thank you and ill be commenting again on results day !!!
ali hassan
ali hassan 2 ay əvvəl
Legend ,may Allah bless you .
Bigger Bertis
Bigger Bertis 2 ay əvvəl
Amazing thank you brother
l4uryn.
l4uryn. 2 ay əvvəl
For my mock I used your story and I got 25/40 because apparently it didn’t fit the question because it didn’t actually happen to me. My teacher remarked it and gave me 32/40. Should I risk it and use it again? Was the teacher that marked it just weird?
yvsia
yvsia 2 ay əvvəl
ur story has to fit the question; dont do that for ur actual exam.
Adam Aylett
Adam Aylett 2 ay əvvəl
Good Luck to everone doing their GCSE'S or A-Levels !
Belcher 033
Belcher 033 2 ay əvvəl
Is it possible to get 2 descriptions on paper 1 instead of the option for 1 description and 1 story ?
LK
LK 2 ay əvvəl
Yes
kuba
kuba 2 ay əvvəl
saved me so much i didn't know how to describe the picture or tell a story as good as this, i'm just gonna tweak this one and hope for the best
bob
bob 2 ay əvvəl
@kuba thx
kuba
kuba 2 ay əvvəl
@bob if u copy his paragraphs word for word then its plagrism but his story plot isn't plagarism just make your own
bob
bob 2 ay əvvəl
Could I plagiarise his story or would I receive a failing grade
abdoulie Saidy
abdoulie Saidy 2 ay əvvəl
@MrQuicko Gaming actually that's good my teacher say 10 for question 4 is a safe mark and 22 for question 5 is a safe mark
MrQuicko Gaming
MrQuicko Gaming 2 ay əvvəl
same here, in my mock i got 23/40 on this question!
CossacK GG
CossacK GG 2 ay əvvəl
ive been told my whole year 11 to not do a story and instead to describe the picture, does the same rules apply for description?
Mohammed Zaman
Mohammed Zaman 2 ay əvvəl
Thank your a legend 👍🏻✨😀
me
me 2 ay əvvəl
ive revised for enlish language loads but im still getting 3s in it and i need at least a 4 :/ Any advice on how to turn that 3 to a 4 or 5??
Burt_Dev
Burt_Dev 2 ay əvvəl
boost vocab and include colons. make cliff hangers. make it interesting not just repetitve and dull. and act a robot, its not a creative piece
Scoopo
Scoopo 2 ay əvvəl
could you go through another english language 1 paper? also how can i get my test marked
amy
amy 2 ay əvvəl
what an absolute legend man
Lawrencia
Lawrencia 2 ay əvvəl
Can this story be used for any gcse question ?
Max Scott
Max Scott 2 ay əvvəl
@Kesh Logendran edexcel is this possible
Kesh Logendran
Kesh Logendran 2 ay əvvəl
Yes, he has a made a video showing how you can adapt your writing for each question. However, there is still a chance that you can't use this story so make sure you learn his plan.
mariam refaat
mariam refaat 2 ay əvvəl
this is what i needed before my exam tomorrow THANK YOU SO MUCH
bradley brooksbank
bradley brooksbank 2 ay əvvəl
can you do a descriptive writing one ? or is story easier ?
Yosra Shaban
Yosra Shaban 2 ay əvvəl
story much easier
Snoopy Peanuts
Snoopy Peanuts 2 ay əvvəl
can you please write the whole story?
fifatay 11
fifatay 11 2 ay əvvəl
You are the man I feel confident now come on good luck everyone
bahareh moosavi
bahareh moosavi 2 ay əvvəl
You are awesome 👌 thanks
J_shergill
J_shergill 2 ay əvvəl
what happens if i use more then 4 language devices in each paragraph will this effect my mark and by alot or not?
Usayd Dhorat
Usayd Dhorat 2 ay əvvəl
my English teacher mr Thompson would’ve never taught me this.
Harry Hewitt
Harry Hewitt 2 ay əvvəl
Can you use this plot for the descriptive question aswell
Water Bottle
Water Bottle 2 ay əvvəl
Absolute legend mate
Dhesi Playz
Dhesi Playz 2 ay əvvəl
Do you need to cross out plan for q 5?
Jannah Young
Jannah Young 2 ay əvvəl
Thankyou so much for this.
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